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A Kitten and His Playmate; a Short Story


Exuberant paws padded jovially across the warm, brown carpet as the kitten bounded after its tabby sibling. The brother was speedy, indeed. A blur of brown fur zoomed behind the plush navy couch in an attempt to conceal himself from his feisty playmate. Ears bent back flat against his tiny head, the kitten awaited his chance to pounce.

Shortly after and with no great haste, the tabby strolled into view. Wiggling his rear end and tail in that genuine feline manner, the brown one made his risky move. A playful cry escaped the astonished tabby as the pair toppled over; claws and teeth zealously bared.

The young, agile tabby sprung away from his brother, scampering off in the opposite direction. Suddenly, he stopped and whipped around; tail swishing madly and golden eyes glimmering mischievously. A near visible smirk appeared on the tabby's features as he made a dash for his sibling; the whole process beginning again to the delight of the kittens.

A good while later, the brown kitten lay exhausted on his favorite patch of carpet under a window. An inkling of sunlight cascaded down upon his sleek fur, warming him comfortably. The tabby had tuckered him out for certain, but he'd sure had a whale of a time. Feet resting perfectly under his chin, the kitten allowed his sparkling emerald eyes to close, slipping into a delightful state of calm, leisurely slumber.
Just a little short story that I wrote a few months ago for English 1~~! I liked it fairly well; the teacher gave me a 100% and she liked it. :aww:

This is all original content.

Love,
=mrtysh :dalove:
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12CC Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2010
I melted... seriously... it's so cute...! it's like... you managed to describe something natural and ... well something that would've lasted 5-10 seconds in a wonderful text like this... seriously, very cute and amazing! I aprove of your teacher's grade XD
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mrtysh Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
AWWWWW Thank you so much!!!!!!!! I agree with the grade, too... :lol: I'm so glad you liked this little piece!! That means a lot :aww: :iconredbullglompplz:
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12CC Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010
you're welcome~ it was really cute >////<
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Moonrisepower Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautifully written, and so adorable! :aww:
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mrtysh Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thanks so much!!! :aww:
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Moonrisepower Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! :)
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HyoukyoNoSora Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010
You always amaze me!! The story was really cute and well written~~! The 100% were well deserved! It really made me go all 'Awww~~~!' while reading... and... I learnt a new word: Tabby~~~! Till now I just called that type of cat 'Tiger' because a friend of mine had a cat like that and its name was 'Tigre' (portuguese for 'tiguer' )

Waaah! I must go get ready now... but, thank you for sharing this!!! It was really adorable~~~~!

Bye! :tighthug:
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mrtysh Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Awww thank you so much!! And you EVEN learned a new word :la: I'm very glad you liked it though :meow:
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